Sunday, 24 February 2013

Upcoming Residency with Regie Routman


I can’t believe it! In two days, Regie Routman will be in my classroom for a weeklong residency at Strathmillan School! I am so very excited to be learning with her. Talk about meaningful professional development! I have all of her books and I am so fortunate to have her in my room to push my thinking and move me forward.

In her book, Writing Essentials, Regie discusses twelve concepts necessary for a writer’s skill set:
·      Write for a specific reader and a meaningful purpose.
·      Determine an appropriate topic.
·      Present ideas clearly with logical, well-organized flow.
·      Elaborate on ideas.
·      Embrace language.
·      Create engaging leads.
·      Compose satisfying endings.
·      Craft authentic voice.
·      Reread, rethink, and revise while composing.
·      Apply correct conventions and form.
·      Read widely and deeply – and with a writer’s perspective.
·      Take responsibility for producing effective writing.

From day one, we have been focusing on the question – “What do good writers do?” We’ve been reading quality literature and discussing how authors use certain techniques to make their writing appealing to readers. We’ve charted this information, as anchor charts for the classroom, but I also like students to keep track of ideas in their writers’ notebooks.


One of our school goals focuses on revision and editing. We’ve decided as a class that revision is making your story more appealing for a reader. This is a task that is time consuming and requires a great deal of thinking. You can move ideas around, substitute words, add new thoughts, etc. Editing is about using correct punctuation, grammar and spelling. Students posted their initial thoughts using Padlet earlier on this school year.


In Regie’s most recent book, Literacy and Learning Lessons from a Longtime Teacher, she states that students need to:

“Reread and notice what authors do, including student authors. Notice leads, description, structure, organization, character development, clarity of information, transitions, and much more. Encourage students to apply what authors do as they write.” (p. 27)

I also want my students to take responsibility for their revisions. In the past I have used checklists, but it’s far too easy for a student to simply check off a box and say they did it – without taking the necessary time to ensure something is done well. I wanted students to be able to prove it. I decided to give students a checklist featuring five major areas that have been our focus. They had to prove they had revised their work by stating specific examples from their writing. Next, they had a peer review their revisions. This is also an excellent assessment (see below).


I plan to post my learning experience with Regie Routman. Stay tuned and wish me luck!





Sunday, 3 February 2013

Critical Literacy: Reading and Writing Connections

We continue to discuss and analyze a variety of texts as a whole class, in small groups and individually. I want students to read a text using the "eyes of a reader" - making inferences, making connections or trying to understand a character's actions. I want students to be active readers who share how a text made them feel or what it made them think. I also want them to read stories using the "eyes of a writer"- noticing word choice, thinking about how the writer used details to help paint a picture for the reader, etc. Both of these practices complement each other and go hand in hand. 

Currently, I am using a fantastic book as a read aloud called Wonder by R.J. Palacio. As one of my students has said, "It's the type of book that punches you in the gut." The writing is excellent and students can easily relate and empathize with the main character of this novel. I decided to choose some of the story passages that we already had discussed as a whole class and have pairs of students study them. I purposefully selected passages that would initiate conversation and tug at their hearts. Students worked together to discuss their snippet from two perspectives - as a reader (what were they thinking) and as a writer (what did the author do to make this writing excellent). 

Analyzing pieces of "Wonder" by R.J. Palacio.
Next, I wanted students to use the same process with a different text. I selected the short story, The Party by Pam Munoz Ryan.  This is one of my favourite stories to share with intermediate students. It's about a girl who is left out. She learns from the "flittering of small white envelopes being stuffed into backpacks" that she was not invited to a party. We had read this story earlier on in the year. This time, I decided to give a little section of the story to a pair a students. They analyzed their snippet, charted their thinking and presented their findings with the class. Here are two examples below:






Working through this process using several texts has many benefits. I have noticed such a difference in the quality of discussion in my classroom. Students are better equipped to share their personal opinions during book clubs. Student writing has also improved. Students are beginning to apply what "real authors do" to their own work. 





Monday, 14 January 2013

Critical Literacy

Analyzing a variety of texts over a period of time is one of my favourite things to do with my Grade 4/5 students. I specifically select texts that deal with "meaty" issues because I want discussions that are rich, meaningful and relevant to their lives.


Recently, I read the picture book, My Secret Bully by Trudy Ludwig. This is an excellent story dealing with the complex nature of bullying.  As I read this story, I was able to pause and share my thinking aloud with students. Students also shared their thoughts, questions and surprises. Sharing our thinking as a whole group allows students to hear multiple viewpoints. They begin to develop a "language of discussion" such as "I agree with", "I am piggybacking on that idea" or "At first I thought, but now I am thinking". These types of experiences will serve them well when they are talking about books in small group book clubs or literature circles.

One group charting their thinking.

Another group selecting passages.
Next, I had students work in small groups analyzing the same text. I typed up the story on the computer and students worked together to select passages that really tugged at their hearts. I instructed them to create a t-chart on a large piece of paper with "Text" on one side and "Reaction" on the other. They cut out these passages and then wrote down all of their thinking beside each passage. 

An example of the thinking from one group.
Students were able to write more critically about what they had read because of the rich discussion that already occurred as a whole class and because of the support of others in their small groups.


We gathered at the carpet again as a whole group so that each small group could present their thinking. 



Tuesday, 20 November 2012

Digital Citizenship

We have been discussing how important it is to be a responsible user of technology - especially when online. I decided to show a video created by Common Sense Media. I asked students to specifically watch the different images featured in the video.


Afterwards, we discussed how the "fingerprint" image makes us realize that everyone is unique and leaves a mark when online. The "football stadium" image is a great reminder that the Internet is a massive public space. The "permanent marker" image shows that you need to be careful what you post online because it is very hard to take something down. Finally, the "lighthouse" image reveals how easy it is for someone to search for information about you!

That's exactly what I wanted students to think about. What online information did they want connected to their names 10 - 15 years from now? Students created a list of ideas at school and they also talked to their parents about it at home. 

We used Tagxedo to put our key words into a fancy footprint picture. Here is one example:


Students will be posting their Tagxedo creations in their own blogs. We also typed up our ideas and created a footprint using fancy lettering and pencil crayons. You can see that I told my students to dream big!

This is an example of one student's list.
This is the complete piece.
Finally, we discussed the entire experience together and created a shared piece of writing for our bulletin board outside of our classroom.


This is one of our bulletin boards. We have another one on the opposite side of the hallway.







Sunday, 21 October 2012

Creating a Character Trait Study

Studying the work of various authors is an important component to my writing program. As a young girl, I loved reading these little books written by Roger Hargreaves. Students in my classroom enjoy them too! At first glance, the Mr. Men and Little Miss Series of books appear to be geared toward primary students. However, they are perfect for studying character traits with Grades Four and Five!


I decided to pass out a basket of these books to each table group in my room. I wanted students to browse, read through and enjoy sharing some of the stories with one another. I needed to give them the time to discuss and familiarize themselves with these stories before digging deeper. Next, I asked students to revisit the texts and to think about the key features that make up a Mr. Men or Little Miss book. Here is our class created anchor chart:


Students were required to show how they would portray a specific character trait in a story. I decided to give each table group a character trait and they had to create a web of possibilities. The group below is sharing all the ways they could make a character look, act and feel “miserable” in a story. They also shared a possible problem that may arise and a solution to it. 


This group experience helped students understand how a character trait can be the focal point of a story. We created a special chart in our Book Lover’s Books after each group shared their web. I wanted students to be able to reflect back to this large group experience and the chart would be a great reference tool. 


Currently, students are working on their individual stories. They are also sharing their stories with each other to receive advice and feedback. Students will be reminded to look back to our anchor chart to make sure they have included the criteria needed to make a Mr. Men or Little Miss story. Revision is an important part of the writing process. Slowing down to rethink, rearrange and reflect helps lift the quality of writing.









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